Writing 2

SECOND WRITING

• Evidence and teacher evaluation 

• Reflection 

My second writing is about an experiencie that I had and gave me an important lesson. In this writing I mentioned about my aunt that died when I was 6 years of cancer. I don't know why people always say that they have many problems about their economy or social life, but they have never thought about other people that have real problems about their health and the time that they have left to live. 

In this writing I improved a little more than the last writing, but I still have some errors in the grammar section. I need to practice every day because sometimes I don't have the enough vocabulary to communicate with other people or to understand the foreign people. I have to write daily a short paragraph about the experiences that I had in the day and only with the practice I will improve.